Vision: Well, first of all, great job with the colors. You really managed to capture the different colors of the feathers. And you also got the feathers to look real and soft. The shading is good. Great job here! Originality: of course birds are used, but you did make yours look somehow different from others I have seen. The eye looks awsome, and the lights on the beak make it look real. Techinique: Great job on the deatails. Yout technique is really good, specially how you mixed pencil with water color. Also the shades. Impact: Really nice indeed. Looks real and neatly done. Great job, I really liked it.